I Wrote This Song ,What Do You Think?
A Heartbeat Faltered
A frozen heart melted then
All I knew things forever were to change when
I love you sealed in time with a kiss
Like a dove flown away from this
Chorus:
A heartbeat faltered for you
For one second the fire, it lit
Desire never stronger, perfect never closer
My heartbeat faltered for you, for you.
A rainbow painted
Sprayed with black
I was left a bloody wreck
But you came back; still I’ve yet to heal
Though I know these wounds that you will seal
I trust you now; I know this is real.
Chorus.
A single wish, only you
A butterfly woken by the thunder
Shaken from a nightmare
Fear no more; I will take it all away
I promise I’ll arrive someday
I’ll arrive someday.
Chorus x2
I ♥ it you are so talented
who broke your
heart
was the same guy who made you wright the other song?
i would totaly listen to it
as i told you i have no talent for wrighting songs
It’s really really good! I’d listen to it
You’ve got a nice talent.
Not bad, but deserve +4, only problem is the title is not going well
I would say "the fire was lit" instead of the grammatically challenged comma break, but otherwise it’s spot on.
For the person who denounced your title, we could simplify to just two words: "Faltering Heartbeat".