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Help With My Evil Female Fey of Ice and Snow?

I am not sure how to show in the description she has four canine fangs. Should she have wings? Would her wearing a wears a fur cloak made from a polar bear.that has the head of a polar bear fit her? What else can I do to improve her description.
How about following as some of her powers? Completely invisible and undetectable by modern machines while in a snowstorm unless within 12 feet (3.65m) or closer. The same is true if she dives into snow and covers herself completely Can walk on top of snow and the thinnest ice without making noise, falling through, or leaving tracks (impossible to track) Can climb pillars of ice, and glaciers equal to a skill of 97%/92%. Can see in blowing snow. Skate across ice and ski across snow with grace and at triple her normal running speed.
Sense the approach of snow, snow storms, and ice storms involving air and freezing water at 95%, up to 200 miles away.
Fire is her weakness.
Height 5 feet tall
Weight 100 lbs
A petite woman walks in, moving with both surety and seduction. There is something sexy about the way she carries herself, a hidden power to her movements, but covered by a demure facade. She has smooth snow white skin tinged with ice. Her segmented ivory horns start at the front of where her hairline starts and move over her head, to the back of her skull where they extend outward, curl, and come to a point. Her segmented horns start at the front of where her hairline starts and move over her head, to the back of her skull where they extend outward, curl, and come to a point. Her straight snow white hair descends down her back to just below her waist with some hair hang down around the right side of her face. Her face is perfectly round from her hairline to her chin. The ears are long with the tops of the ears being extremely pointed. Her perfectly shaped brows lead to her perfectly shaped small nose that points upwards and thick lashes that bat sweetly over her icy blue almond shaped eyes. Her eyes pierce you as you gaze into them. They seem to draw you in, yet your soul protests. Her crimson full lips deceive her authority. She is dress in fur clothing made from the fur of a polar bear. She stands with elegance; she is at home wherever she is. The vinyl black bra she wears has double cross strap in the front.

  1. e.l
    July 1st, 2011 at 16:29 | #1

    WOAH.

    Info-dump much? And it’s pretty repetative, too.

    Scrap that.

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