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Diving Into the Wreck

My mantra. Diving Into The Wreck by Adrienne Rich First having read the book of myths, and loaded the camera, and checked the edge of the knife-blade, I put on the body-armor of black rubber the absurd flippers the grave and awkward mask. I am having to do this not like Cousteau with his assiduous team aboard the sun-flooded schooner but here alone. There is a ladder. The ladder is always there hanging innocently close to the side of the schooner. We know what it is for, we who have used it. Otherwise it is a piece of maritime floss some sundry equipment. I go down. Rung after rung and still the oxygen immerses me the blue light the clear atoms of our human air. I go down. My flippers cripple me, I crawl like an insect down the ladder and there is no one to tell me when the ocean will begin. First the air is blue and then it is bluer and then green and then black I am blacking out and yet my mask is powerful it pumps my blood with power the sea is another story the sea is not a question of power I have to learn alone to turn my body without force in the deep element. And now: it is easy to forget what I came for among so many who have always lived here swaying their crenellated fans between the reefs and besides you breathe differently down here. I came to explore the wreck. The words are purposes. The words are maps. I came to see the damage that was done and the treasures that prevail. I stroke the beam of my lamp slowly along the flank of something more permanent than

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  1. gchao
    December 12th, 2008 at 18:42 | #1

    this is great. is there an mp3?

  2. ir133
    February 22nd, 2009 at 00:24 | #2

    This poem is a metaphorical journey of discovery, Rich through most of her life struggled hugely with her sexuality and this poem is all about her discovery. When Rich says
    “the thing i came for;
    the wreck and not the story of the wreck
    the thing itself and not the myth”
    here Rich is searching for the truth and not the myths of men and women.

    !!

  3. U2bianSynic
    February 22nd, 2009 at 00:33 | #3

    Indeed.

    How many of us are still living within that story or that myth…?

  4. procatcher199
    February 24th, 2009 at 06:25 | #4

    Powerful we are studying emily dickinson right now and this juxtaposes to so many central themes emily dickinson protrays ….. THANKS MS. SPERRY FOR THIS LINK !!!!!!!! very powerful

  5. U2bianSynic
    February 24th, 2009 at 06:45 | #5

    I’m glad you see the connections there.

    …and thanks Ms. Sperry ;o)

  6. pmpsty
    March 24th, 2009 at 21:53 | #6

    God, I love this poem so much. I only hope that I get to the point where the external forces of history can pull me towards a truth as powerful as Rich’s.

  7. U2bianSynic
    March 24th, 2009 at 21:55 | #7

    Hell, yes. Maybe that’s why we’re so connected to it…it speaks to our hope for reaching that point in our own personal evolutions…

  8. mooglesarerabbits
    March 29th, 2009 at 02:18 | #8

    adrienne rich was a lesbian vampire killer

  9. bboyxclub
    April 3rd, 2009 at 02:50 | #9

    Beatiful, I love the song. Is that Enigma??? If so what song??

  10. U2bianSynic
    April 3rd, 2009 at 03:47 | #10

    Thanks, and the track is by Tryad Listen. :o )

  11. Precisemalediction
    May 16th, 2009 at 23:09 | #11

    Lovely stuff. Thanks very much.

  12. andreagheen
    June 13th, 2009 at 18:18 | #12

    did you make the video? and put the music w/AR’s reading? I love it!!

  13. U2bianSynic
    June 13th, 2009 at 19:22 | #13

    I did. I’m very glad you like it. It meant a lot for me, personally, to be able to create something that represented my connection to this poem and for others to feel it means a lot to me.

  14. pippigirl5
    July 8th, 2009 at 05:23 | #14

    I enjoyed your clip…I love Adrienne Rich!

  15. jeffreyjoe2
    September 11th, 2009 at 22:17 | #15

    Great, but the music is too loud…overpowers the voice.

  16. SydTheSkeptic
    September 12th, 2009 at 01:17 | #16

    I think you’re right on about that. Thanks :o )

  17. b00i00d
    November 9th, 2009 at 15:34 | #17

    Yes, I agree. Great video and the music does bring out the atmosphere partly, but it needs to be backgrounded a bit.

  18. ASLstudentUSM
    December 18th, 2009 at 00:22 | #18

    wow! amazing…really amazing

  19. SydTheSkeptic
    December 18th, 2009 at 00:24 | #19

    Glad you liked! Making this video was cathartic for me.

  20. fayjoojoo793
    April 8th, 2010 at 17:46 | #20

    I found your wonderful appreciation of the Rich poem last semester and have used it now twice in my Women and Literature class. I have been teaching the poem for over twenty years, and your video with the poet’s voice in the background serve as a terrific tool for understanding Rich’s poem. Thank you! Will you do some other poems?

  21. paulkwan27
    April 26th, 2010 at 21:06 | #21

    This is really amazing. Nice Job.

  22. racbeck
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:19 | #22

    I have to say, you did a great job with this.. it really captures the poem

  23. SydTheSkeptic
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:35 | #23

    @racbeck Thank you! It’s my favorite poem- has meant a lot to me through the years.

  24. SydTheSkeptic
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:39 | #24

    @fayjoojoo793 That’s great!! This poem has helped me to reshape my own narrative, so that it’s mine, entirely.

    Rich will be visiting my city in a couple of weeks so I’m going to try to see her after a reading she’s giving and let her know about this- I sure hope she likes it. It’s kind of scary thinkin’ about approaching her, but I’m determined! :o )

    Thanks for the feedback- it made my day.

  25. SydTheSkeptic
    May 15th, 2010 at 20:58 | #25

    @paulkwan27 Thank you! Got my tix to see Rich in Santa Fe in a couple of weeks. :o )

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